My Story Writting Goals

 In class, we are learning to use new sentence types to improve our work. I created a template of my goals and what I need to work on.  Enjoy!

Not Yet Developing Got It

My story flows and I use punctuation for effect:

I have an interesting hook:

I have a good organisation (paragraphs help the reader with the orientation, problem, complication, solution):

I have used, . ?!  correctly within direct speech:

I have short sentences for impact and longer sentences to build detail:

I have used wow words (verbs, adjectives, nouns):

I have figurative language ( simile, metaphor, idiom personification):

I mostly use show not tell:

I have a wide variety of  sentence starters:

I have a 2A, double ly; de; de;  simile; verb, person sentence; 3 ed; emotion word, sentence;

P.C sentence:

I can give, and respond to, peer and teacher feedback to improve my work and my friend’s.

I need to improve on: Giving and responding to, peer and teacher feedback to improve my work and my friend’s.

I mostly use show not tell

I have a wide variety of  sentence starters