Desperate times call for desperate measures but does this make stealing right? A young boy, Ryder, is living in a town that is suffering extreme water loss. His parents are too poor to afford water and him and his little sister are on the verge of dehydration. Their clothes are dirty, their lips are chapped and they haven't had a shower in a while. His neighbour's tank is overflowing with water and the valve is unlocked. Ryder steals it. Was he right or wrong? This is a run down of the story below. Basically, a narrative plot planner. Toodles.
Hi Dechei, I really like your introduction; it shows understanding of the plot. Two areas that would improve are, one the readability of your Google-Draw is not great due to text size and background choice (hint decorative elements should fit the text ie arid land and not distract from text). Also, I would have loved to read you expand on your idea about the author's message rather than include the quote from the text.
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